Bug #832636. Remove mention of gentoolkit.

Also remove second person pronouns and general formatting/readiblity updates. Now reads better to native English speakers, in my opinion.

Signed-off-by: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster@gentoo.org>

2 files changed, 16 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/support/security/index.html b/support/security/index.html
index 7b7faf1..3750a1b 100644
--- a/support/security/index.html
+++ b/support/security/index.html
@@ -15,15 +15,14 @@ layout: page-nav3
 <h2>Security in Gentoo Linux</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Security is a primary focus of Gentoo Linux and ensuring the confidentiality and security of our users machines is of utmost importance to us.
+  Security is a primary focus of Gentoo Linux and ensuring the confidentiality and security of our user's machines is of utmost importance to us.
   The <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Security">Security Project</a>
   is tasked with providing timely information about security vulnerabilities in Gentoo Linux, along with patches to secure those vulnerabilities.
-  We work directly with vendors, end users and other OSS projects to ensure all security incidents are responded to quickly and professionally.
+  We work directly with vendors, end users, and other OSS projects to ensure all security incidents are responded to quickly and professionally.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  You can find a document describing the policy the security team follows to treat the vulnerabilities found in the
-  Gentoo Linux distribution on the <a href="vulnerability-treatment-policy.html">Vulnerability Treatment Policy</a> page.
+  Documentation describing security team vulnerability treatment can be found in our <a href="vulnerability-treatment-policy.html">Vulnerability Treatment Policy</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Installing a secure Gentoo system</h3>
@@ -34,22 +33,22 @@ layout: page-nav3
 
 <h3>Keeping Gentoo secure</h3>
 <p>
-  To stay up-to-date with the security fixes you should subscribe to receive GLSAs and apply GLSA instructions whenever you have an affected package installed.
-  Alternatively, syncing your portage tree and upgrading every package should also keep you up-to-date security-wise.
+  Community members who wish to stay up-to-date with the security fixes should subscribe to GLSAs and apply GLSA instructions whenever an affected package installed.
+  Alternatively, regularly syncing the Gentoo ebuild repository and upgrading every package should also keep the system up-to-date security-wise.
 </p>
 <p>
-  You can use <kbd>glsa-check</kbd> tool (part of the <tt>gentoolkit</tt> package) to:
+  The <kbd>glsa-check</kbd> tool can be used to:
 </p>
 <ul>
-  <li>Check if a specific GLSA applies to your system (<kbd>-p</kbd> option)</li>
+  <li>Check if a specific GLSA applies to a system (<kbd>-p</kbd> option)</li>
   <li>List all GLSAs with applied/affected/unaffected status (<kbd>-l</kbd> option)</li>
-  <li>Apply a given GLSA to your system (<kbd>-f</kbd> option).</li>
+  <li>Apply a given GLSA to a system (<kbd>-f</kbd> option).</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h2>Gentoo Linux Security Announcements (GLSAs)</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Gentoo Linux Security Announcements are notifications that we send out to the community to inform them of security vulnerabilities related to Gentoo Linux or the packages contained in our portage repository.
+  Gentoo Linux Security Announcements are notifications that we send out to the community to inform them of security vulnerabilities related to Gentoo Linux or the packages contained in the <a href="https://gitweb.gentoo.org/repo/gentoo.git">Gentoo ebuild repository</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Recent advisories</h3>
@@ -74,7 +73,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  If you find errors or omissions in published GLSAs, you should also file a bug in <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org">Gentoo Bugzilla</a> in the <em>Gentoo Security</em> product, but with <em>GLSA Errors</em> component.
+  If errors or omissions are found in published GLSAs, please file a bug in <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org">Gentoo Bugzilla</a> in the <em>Gentoo Security</em> product, with the <em>GLSA Errors</em> component.
 </p>
 
 <p>
diff --git a/support/security/stay-informed.html b/support/security/stay-informed.html
index f0f4ba2..622b81c 100644
--- a/support/security/stay-informed.html
+++ b/support/security/stay-informed.html
@@ -14,16 +14,14 @@ layout: page-nav3
     <i class="fa fa-terminal fa-5x"></i>
   </div>
   <div class="col-md-8">
-    <h2>Check your system's status</h2>
+    <h2>Check the system's status</h2>
 
-    <p>Use <kbd>glsa-check</kbd> to check your system's security status.<br>
-      To see all advisories that affect your system, run:</p>
+    <p>Use the <kbd>glsa-check</kbd> tool to check the system's security status.<br>
+      To see all advisories that affect the system, run:</p>
 
-    <p class="lead"><kbd>% glsa-check -t affected</kbd></p>
+    <p class="lead"><kbd>glsa-check -t affected</kbd></p>
 
-    <p>
-      If you don't have the utility installed, run <kbd>emerge -va app-portage/gentoolkit</kbd>.<br>
-      For more information, review the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GLSA">documentation</a> on our Wiki.</p>
+    <p>For more information, review <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GLSA">the GLSA documentation</a> on our wiki.</p>
   </div>
 </div>
 
@@ -55,7 +53,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
   <div class="col-md-8">
     <h2>Feeds</h2>
 
-    <p>We offer <em>RSS</em> and <em>Atom</em> feeds that you can subscribe to using your news reader:</p>
+    <p>We offer <em>RSS</em> and <em>Atom</em> feeds for subscription via a news reader of choice:</p>
 
     <ul class="lead">
       <li><a href="https://security.gentoo.org/glsa/feed.rss">RSS 2.0</a></li>